Commitment. Committed. Without expectations. Without a set direction. Just an intention. A promise. An agreement between two people. Two human beings. Imperfect as they can be. In the beginning. Pure love. Bliss. Butterflies. Flowers. Date nights. Novelty. Excitement. Inevitably. Things will change. Love will transform. Grow. Evolve into something else. Someone else. Multiple identities in a lifetime. One source of inspiration for life. One person. One day. Every day. Choosing to be. Together. To walk. Side by side. Parallel lives. Occasionally stepping into each others. Respecting individual differences. Decisions. There will be ups. Downs. Times of doubt. Jealousy. Other options. Distractions. Attractions. Willpower babe. Surrender. Accept. Introspect. Gain depth. Truly meet yourself. The other. Truly know why you chose to be with one another.
Fascinating getting to peep inside your mind from these poems. So much within few words; everything in a one-word sentence. I'm no expert in this type of writing, but I do know a good piece when I see one.
You are an expert in whetting the reader's appetite, letting them be consumed by wonder, imagination, and extrapolation. You, Terra, are guilty of what you'll ever be accused of, because you set the stage for any and all things that the reader will ever imagine.
Patrick. I'm overwhelmed by your words. You are so kind and generous and supportive. Thank you for taking time off your day to read my poems. Thank you taking even more time to digest them and provide me with such an insightful feedback. I'm pleased we connected through our art. That we can lift each others spirit and that I can be a source of inspiration for you. For someone. In some place. At any given time. That's amazing. From a creative to another. I'm truly and deeply grateful.
Fascinating getting to peep inside your mind from these poems. So much within few words; everything in a one-word sentence. I'm no expert in this type of writing, but I do know a good piece when I see one.
You are an expert in whetting the reader's appetite, letting them be consumed by wonder, imagination, and extrapolation. You, Terra, are guilty of what you'll ever be accused of, because you set the stage for any and all things that the reader will ever imagine.
Patrick. I'm overwhelmed by your words. You are so kind and generous and supportive. Thank you for taking time off your day to read my poems. Thank you taking even more time to digest them and provide me with such an insightful feedback. I'm pleased we connected through our art. That we can lift each others spirit and that I can be a source of inspiration for you. For someone. In some place. At any given time. That's amazing. From a creative to another. I'm truly and deeply grateful.
You're welcome, Terra, and thank you too.
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